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Writing Book Proposal Chapter Outlines for a How-to Book

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Editing a book proposal yesterday I observed a common problem–this author didn’t know what to emphasize in her chapter outlines. I found myself asking, ‘Who cares?” as I read through the first few chapter outlines. In fact, I’d already read chapters of her book and I did care very much–this book has a large potential audience who is desperate for the powerful tools this author has to offer. It just didn’t come across in the chapter outlines at all.

If you write your chapter outlines with the following perspective in mind, you’ll avoid that problem and come up with a compelling and motivating outline for your book proposal.

As your write about what’s in each chapter, keep in mind your readers’ biggest problems, challkenges and goals. What benefits or results are they looking for? You might start your outline with, “The chapter begins with a story about x that illustrates y.” In this single sentence, you can capture some sense of either the problem, the benefits of your solution or both.

Chapter Outlines Should Highlight Readers’ Takeaways

Make sure to highlight the takeaways of each chapter:

*  Will your readers reach a new understanding or perspective? Clarify.

*  What new tools will readers have and what results may these tools help them produce in their lives or work?

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The more your understand your readers’ needs and who your readers are, the easier it will be to write your chapter outlines. [photo by David Donohue]
*  What stories do you have to illustrate your points and make the material come alive? You can use the above format to simplify rather than trying to summarize the story, unless your book is more narrative in nature (this post assumes a more prescriptive self-help / how-to book rather than something narrative).

* What features are included in the chapter (a sidebar that describes the latest research? a quotation, several exercises?)?

For a prescriptive book, it’s fine to bullet point. You don’t have to capture absolutely everything in the chapter–focus on what’s going to empower your readers and be most important to them. Your chapter also doesn’t need to teach agents and publishers the material. They just want to know that you have enough material, fresh material, that you address the needs of your readers, that it’s well organized, etc.

Writing a book proposal? Share your questions about chapter outlines and other book proposal issues below.

Lisa Tener

Lisa Tener is an award-winning book writing coach who assists writers in all aspects of the writing process—from writing a book proposal and getting published to finding one’s creative voice. Her clients have appeared on The Oprah Winfrey Show, CBS Early Show, The Montel Williams Show, CNN, Fox News, New Morning and much more. They blog on sites like The Huffington Post, Psychology Today and WebMD.

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  1. Ginger says

    Lisa, this is such great advice, in a nutshell. I taught a business writing class at the MBA level and my students were always shocked when I told them to put their message up front, in the first sentence. The question to answer was: what is the bottom line? It’s a real craft to figure it what the core message is and say it. It’s well worth it.

  2. Mike Larsen says

    Excellent advice. But writers have to finish their memoirs before trying to find a publisher. Once the manuscript has been rewritten and critique by many knowledgeable readers, how to choose what to include in outlines will be clear. Of course, getting feedback on the outline is also essential.

    • grace naughton says

      On Page 3 of “How to Write a Book Proposal” you state that “90% of nonfiction is sold with proposals”. If memoirs are sold mostly by proposal, can you kindly clarify the conflicting information I am reading?

  3. Celeste Vaughan says

    In writing a chapter summary for my memoir, I can’t seem to find anywhere if it should be written in first person like the memoir or in third person as most chapter outlines are.

  4. farial says

    Great post Lisa. I am writing the l chapter outline for my first novel’s proposal. The narrative is in first person. My question is the same as Celeste’s. Should I write the chapter outline in first person or keep it in the third person.
    please help.

  5. Maureen says

    Really helpful post especially re the first person or third person 🙂 I am wondering Lisa if you are familiar with the UK market? I live in Scotland and would be interested in exploring getting help with my book. Do you work with clients in the UK?

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