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How to Come up With a Book Title that Sizzles

creativity cure book coverIt’s always exciting to help a client come up with a great book title. I still remember the conversation where I suggested The Creativity Cure to Carrie Barron. The title came from listening to Carrie talk about the work she does with her clients, the problems they have, the promise, benefits and results they are seeking. I heard two things in listening to Carrie: a) Creativity was the method by which she helped people  and b) the people she helped were depressed, anxious and unhappy. The Creativity Cure spoke to the audience and offered a solution to their problem–a potential cure, in fact.

You can use these 5 simple questions to come up with a book title that resonates for your target audience and sells books!

1. WHO’S YOUR READER? A great book title always begins with understanding who your audience is. With Carrie, I pointed out that, from listening to her talk about her clients, her reading audience was probably similar, rather than people who saw themselves as creative, it was more broad: people who are depressed, anxious or unhappy. You can’t come up with a book title that sizzles unless you first know who your readers are.

2. WHAT’S THE PROBLEM? Are they burned out? Living paycheck to paycheck? Overwhelmed as a parent? Feeling blah? Sick? Adopted? Lonely? Single but wanting to be married? Or maybe they don’t exactly have a problem, but they have a goal or vision: perhaps they are seeking a spiritual or religious experience, they want to double their income or they want to adopt the perfect pet (these, too, can be stated as a problem–that they don’t quite know how to do these things, but the primary motivator is the vision or goal).

An example of a one-word title for a memoir by Bring Your Book to Life graduate Kimber Simpkins (the book won a Nautilus Award in 2014 and was picked up by a traditional publisher).
An example of a one-word title for a memoir by Bring Your Book to Life graduate Kimber Simpkins (the book won a Nautilus Award in 2014 and was picked up by a traditional publisher).

3. WHAT WORDS DO YOUR READERS USE? Today, I was on a call with a participant in my Bring Your Book to Life Program, which begins in two weeks. She shared an absolutely brilliant testimonial from one of her clients with me. He shared in detail the dramatic shifts that occurred in his coaching sessions with her. I told her to circle all the problems and all the benefits. Some of these words might be perfect for her title and some might be perfect for chapter titles, or even headings within the chapters. When you mirror your clients’ or readers’ words back to them, they resonate more deeply than if you use your own words. Plus your words an an author might be more feature-oriented. You might use jargon or words that people in your industry tend to overuse. In this case, the author was using a formerly powerful word but one that felt tired from recent overuse. As a result, the title didn’t sound fresh.

4. WHAT ARE YOUR READERS LOOKING FOR, IN THEIR WORDS? Once again, you want to get into your readers’ minds and use the words they use to describe the results and benefits they’re looking for. What’s the big vision or goal? Or what’s the new result they want? In the case of today’s phone call, we thought about the words that would really speak to what her readers are looking for. We looked at some of the overused words and consulted a trusty thesaurus for more exciting alternatives–and we found them. Use your readers’ words, for sure, but also be ready to find synonyms that will add energy or freshness if your readers’ words are a bit stale from overuse.

5. WHAT’S THE CONTEXT? If this is a business book, that needs to be clear from the title and/or subtitle. If it’s a parenting book, it can’t sound like a dating book or your readers will be confused. The title doesn’t always have to be clear if the subtitle explains it. Sometimes you can go for a playful title or a one word title that relies on the subtitle for clarity. That’s fine. One word titles can have impact and there is value to simplicity. Just ask Malcolm Gladwell!

book cover: mastering the art of recruiting
Another good title–this one came out of a suggestion by a classmate in Bring Your Book to Life

BONUSCAN YOU MAKE IT PLAYFUL? Not all titles need to be playful, but in our information-overloaded and entertainment-driven culture, a fun and playful title can make your book stand out and be more captivating.

When wondering how to come up with a book title for a nonfiction book, particularly self-help or how-to, you have several options:

  • A catchy title that makes it very clear both who the book is for and what are the benefits, followed by a subtitle that gives more of a sense of the features (i.e. a 10 week program, a 10 step plan)
  • A creative title that sounds fun or intriguing or playful and invites us to want to know more, followed by a subtitle that makes it clear who the book is for and at least one or more benefits.
  • A super short title (perhaps only a word) that catches readers’ attention, followed by a subtitle that makes it clear who the book is for and at least one or more benefits.
  • Some variation on the above.

Can you have a title without a subtitle? You can do anything you want. If the title says it all, you may not need a subtitle.

TITLE Fixes and Tips:

Sometimes my clients come up with two titles and no subtitle; that is, both titles sound a bit poetic or fun or intriguing, but neither fully explains the book. In this case, pick the catchier title and work on a subtitle that’s more specific and clear.

Test your title and subtitle on people in your target market (clients are ideal) and see what resonates the most for them. (Click to Tweet This)  Feel free to come up with many titles (you can even use a focus group for this) and have your audience help you come up with titles! Or just get them talking about their problems, needs and desires and make note of the words they use. Can you use their words in the title?

Use a thesaurus to find alternatives that are shorter, more specific, fresher or just plain old sound better.

Have any questions about how to come up with a book title that sizzles? Ask as a comment and I will answer. Feel free to share your ideas about how to come up with a great book title, as well.

Lisa Tener

Lisa Tener is an award-winning book writing coach who assists writers in all aspects of the writing process—from writing a book proposal and getting published to finding one’s creative voice. Her clients have appeared on The Oprah Winfrey Show, CBS Early Show, The Montel Williams Show, CNN, Fox News, New Morning and much more. They blog on sites like The Huffington Post, Psychology Today and WebMD.

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  1. Deborah says

    When writing a memoir, instead of using chapter titles, is it ok to use a quote from a song at the beginning of every chapter? Thanks

    • Lisa Tener says

      Great question, Deborah. We actually used song titles for the chapter titles of my first book. We followed the song title with a subtitle that was more descriptive of content. However, actual lyrics would be challenging because you would have to get permission for lyrics and you would need to pay for those, as well as track down who owns the rights. I would be tempted to stay away from lyrics for that reason but if you can do it with titles, try that.

  2. Laurie says

    Thank you for this great blog post!
    Quick Q: Is it a good thing (raise interest and awareness) or a bad thing (someone might steal it) for an author to share his/her book title during the writing process?

    • Lisa Tener says

      Great question, Laurie. If your title is part of a brand and you start using it that way, it can be fine. For instance, you might use your title as the name of your blog.
      However, there is some risk that someone might use your title, and they may not even be aware of it. They might read the title and ten days later think they came up with it. So, if it’s something very catchy, you may decide to wait until you are close to your publishing date to share the title (perhaps wait until the book is even available on Amazon for pre-order).
      As you may know, a title cannot be copyrighted. So someone can use the same title as you legally. It’s rare that an author will use a title in use since most want their book to be unique.

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